Feedback Letter

After reading Thomas' letter in response to my essay about the Special Olympics, I was reassured that the essay was going in the direction that I intended. I am actually glad that Thomas read my essay because he is the type of audience that I am trying to address, athletes at Virginia Tech. Some of the things that he liked were the relations to sports, and the testimony from a basketball player that struck a chord with him. Thomas understands what it feels like to help the less fortunate, so he knew how important organizations like the Special Olympics are for people who need the help.